In the story S.O.R Losers, I think the boys in the team are being sore losers. They lost every game(except the last one which they didn't play yet) in the season act like they don't care. Even if they didn't care, they should practice more a try to actually win. They say there good at other stuff and not good at sports so they don't try. Well how do you be good at something without practice. I think this is a negative trait and they are being foolish. The boys in the team are sore losers.
3/22/2014
Everyone thinks that the S.O.R Losers should win and that they will feel bad if they lose. However, the team members don't feel the same way. They are not afraid to state their opinions even when everyone else thinks they are wrong. Do you think this is a positive or negative trait? Do you think they are being brave by sticking to their ideals or do you think they are being foolish and stubborn by not listening to what everyone else has to say? State your opinion and support it with examples in your own life
You did a great job, Yusuf! It's great how you firmly presented your opinion and supported it clearly. It's great that you explained why you have that opinion and what the characters could do differently to have the right trait. You answered pretty much all the questions except for giving an example from your own life. You could have made the paragraph even stronger by mentioning a time in your own life that helped you have this point of view.
ReplyDeleteEven though you made quite a few grammatical errors, you still wrote everything pretty clearly.
Keep it up!